Giving the reader an idea of how peace in the Suburbs works, in "Suburban" John Ciardi uses lighthearted sarcasm, situational irony and the charactarization of the neighbour who calles and blames the speaker's dog for pooping in her garden although he is in Vermont at htat time , in order to show that sometimes people baer the blame even if they didn't do anything wrong, only to keep the the relationships in their community work fine.
Besides simple spelling problems, the only thing I would change is the middle part about the neighbor. The explanation of "characterization of the neighbor" would be used in the paragraphs following the thesis statement. It simply clutters the thesis when it is included. Other than that, it is a very good thesis!
ReplyDelete